The Dolphins of Oceanus

Rating 2 / 5

I was worried about the story as the first part was not well written. It got slightly better but it still had the problem of too many characters

As a transformation book it is also very lacking. You could cut out the beginning, the epilogue and rewrite a couple of paragraphs and you would have a non transformation book

If it went though another round of editing, such as by removing a number of characters, and other things it could be a better story.

A couple of themes also seem to be forced in, namely environmental and slight religious themes.

Overall I think I am slightly generous in giving it a 2 instead of a 1.


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