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Follow the dots emptystar emptystar emptystar emptystar emptystar

As you do the dot moves in the same direction as you are going. You sighs. "Of course it's tracking me. Why didn't I think of that?" and before you have moved far the dot has gone off the screen


You see if you can't find some way to extend the radar's range. "Come on, Amy, or whoever all this knowledge is from... show how much of a genius you are."


Soon you have the dot in the center much smaller but the radar is now fixed in place. You can see two dots now in the center and many others spread out over the screen


"Always one useless extreme or the other."
You try to guess which dot is at least as large as hers on the screen.


you estimate it is about half a days travel to the dot

Written by catprog on 17 March 2011

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