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dent is made halfstar emptystar emptystar emptystar emptystar

You try a second time nothing happens.
You try a third time still nothing happens


"ha ha I told you to give up"


you try a fifth time and make a small dent you try two more time and the dent becomes bigger in the lock.


"ha ha what are you ah" as the mage looks and realise the damage done.

Written by leonmagus2 on 26 July 2008

never... give... up

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