A Measure of Disorder

Rating 3 / 5

The problems with this story are clear from the start, their are too many characters to start off with, each get a paragraph about what they look like

As a result when things happen to some of them, it is only a momentary sad thing before you move on, the character forgotten

By the time we get into the main part of the story though the main characters have been whittled down to just a few.

The plot is pretty simple to start off with, school field trip is taken to another world, where they become creatures belonging to that world

The mental effects of some of the transformations are show(such as into a dragon)

The villain seems to be pretty simple in that he wants to take over the city.

In conclusion, an enjoyable story but nothing much to recommend either way


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