Rating 1 / 5
THeir is hardly any plot in this story. The family is being hunted by another family (although the start kind of explains it in a prologue that has very little relevance). Other then that we have no idea why they would seek out the family after that
Second so many of of the plots are it is is fixed by new thing inroduced jsut now.
Third scenes change is just a paragraph with very little happening. For instance one time they decide to go to a movie and then they go home after the movie. This takes place is about a single paragraph
The biggest problem is the chracters and setting is hardly diffrent at the end then at the begining
Overaly this is the lowest 1 I can give it
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