A Speck of Darkness

Rating 0 / 5

I think this is an example of telling not showing. For instance their is a flashback to an incident at the school the day before the story but it handled as dialog between the two characters.

This is the same for each plot progressing point. It is handled as dialog instead of letting them act.

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