Rating 1 / 5

I was hopeful to start with as the character ended up with a non-human race. In the end he may as well have gone with a human. Apart from references as too how other races look at it, it is generic human variant

Their is some tf content about the difference between NPCs and PCs but again not explored much

Finally the amount of words per plot advancement and some abandoned threads mean it was a struggle to get through it.

Overall while their were some things I want to see explored, I recommend not reading this one

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