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As you run, you feel like you have supernatural strength coursing through your veins. After about half an hour of sprinting on the gravel road, you come to barricade in the road that says: "bridge out ahead". You stop eying it, suspiciously.

 

Funny, you don't smell water nearby. You go to jump over it but then hear some kind of strange crying from all directions. Its as if someone was mowing over a thousand small animals.

 

You spin around looking for what cold be producing the sound and from the woods on the side of the road, you see the same light that changed you. Several small spots of this light scatter all over, but without warning, they stop. You stand there half-crouched waiting for anything.

 

Your military training tells you to get off the road but you fight this instinct because you feel as though the woods themselves want to kill you. Then five large white rabbit men jump out of the woods. They are all about fourteen foot tall muscle bound rabbit creatures that look as if they could bend iron bars like most people break pencils.

 

"Uhm. Hi?" you say as they surround you. Each of them is foaming at the mouth and has death in their eyes. Then you hear a voice from the woods.

 

"Stop all of you!" its a soft feminine voice that almost sings the words it produces. "We are not vicious murderers like our enemy." Then you see her.

 

She is a beautiful fox woman with a flowing white dress like robe. "I am a servant of Lyris," she says breaking through the circle of rabbit men. "My name is Alhohna and we have come here to stop you from killing our queen.

 

Nevertheless, you may still contain part of your own mind and if that is true then you may still be human enough to understand me. Do you understand me?"

 

You lift one of eyebrows and kind of cock your head to one side cross your arms staring at her. "Yeah I understand your words but you are not making any sense. I mean are you crazy and who the hell are these guys!" you say pointing at the rabid rabbits. "I mean where did you come from? What the hell is the purpose of all this who is this queen you talk about and why am I a giant rat?"



Written by Razortail on 07 October 2005


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