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Stunned, Dimakle lets go of you, and you fall; you cry out in fear as you drop, but in the thick water you fall slowly and land gently on the coral and seaweed.

 

But Hermakles does not stop with one blow: he follows Dimakles as he weaves back, clumsily trying to ward off Hermakles’ blows, but the smaller merman darts about the thug, rapping at him and beating him with the butt of his trident.

 

Hermakles turns away from the beaten Dimakles to face Skander who rushes at him, a sharp bone knife in hand. He leaps at Hermakles with a shout, holding the dagger first, but Hermakles ducks under the sharp point. The points of his trident dig into the coral, and he smartly reverses it, plunging the blunt butt into Skander’s belly.

 

The villainous merman grunts weakly as Hermakles strikes him, then doubles over around the trident. Hermakles raises the trident high, then you flinch away as he strikes Skander one last time.

 

You look up withwide eyes as Hermakles bends over you, picking at the seaweed rope binding you. “What did you do?!” you cry in shock.

 

“What I had to,” Hermakles says casually, loosening the knots.

 

You unbend as the rope binding your hands to your tail give way and leap up to stare Hermakles in the eyes. “What did you do?!” you cry out again.

 

He shrugs. “I knew I could never pay back Skander everything he wanted, but I knew that he’d come out of his hole for something like you; so, I just let him know that you’d be there alone, then I came here and waited for him and his bully-boy to come back, and- well, you know the rest,” he says.

 

“You used me!” you cry, heartbroken.

 

“So what?” he says dismissively. “Everything’s fine.”

 

“Everything’s fine for you!” you snap.

 

He shrugs again. “Well, yeah.”

 

You stare at him in broken silence for a long moment, then you turn and swim away from him. And you never look back.



Written by J-B-Hickock on 28 December 2014


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